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Then, This Sudden Rush
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Then, This Sudden Rush |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Then, there are moments so precious, found in early rays of dawn gleaming bronze and amber in captured sighs throughout days, oft' otherwise dreary but moments, so precious, found in smiles of quick passings lasting just long enough to bring a sudden rush of joy into afternoons that slowly lead into a bleeding sunset where the blush of eve casts its glow upon pale of skin basking in precious moments alone with you. seek the flame within yourself |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Donna..left me with a warm feeling and a smile. Hugs~Nancy Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
Good morning Gentle Spirit, What a lovely way to start the day... With thoughts of our loved ones first... my beloved sleeps... but soon will rise... and hopefully we'll capture some of the wonderful imagery you penned here... thank you for this... Namaste, Moonkist Freedom Now |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, a pleasure to view this, enjoyed |
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MukkaKukka Member
since 2006-09-18
Posts 88Finland |
Havent we heard this from you more than once, no offence, but come on! (mod note  Repints of previous works are not prohibited on this site. Insults are....[This message has been edited by Balladeer (10-05-2006 05:32 PM).] |
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Refugee Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 97 |
into afternoons that slowly lead into a bleeding sunset Indeed. Makes one think of private moments with someone that they wish could be captured and frozen in time. Thank you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Moonkinst, thank you. Yes precious are the moments spent with those we cherish, thank you. May you find many with your love. Nancy, glad that you enjoyed a smile sweet lady. Hugs. Dark, your views are always a pleasure, hugs big guy.  MukkaKukka, smiles are contagious, we find them everywhere. No offence taken. Refugee, exactly, like frozen moments that carry us through the day. Thank you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
are you writing just for me today Donna? I love this one... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kate by all means, if they touch you, then please claim them as yours. I am so pleased, that you are enjoying. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just a fine way to start my morning Donna thank you |
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