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CraigM
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since 2006-10-05

Posts 13

0 posted 2006-10-05 07:19 AM

My darling you saved me
From a dark dark place
You were the only one
To put a smile on my face

You helped me to deal
With my ever sinking mind
Your warm encapsulating love
Such a wonderful find

Your arms wrapped around me
In my hours of need
Wiping away my tears
In your embrace I felt freed

For you are my hero
I owe everything to you
You are my eternal heartbeat
And everything else too

For my wife.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-10-05 07:27 AM

I hope she has seen this...

as we welcome you to Passions!

Please, check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

CraigM
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since 2006-10-05

Posts 13

2 posted 2006-10-05 07:33 AM

Thats a great feature. Thanks sunshine :-)

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

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On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2006-10-05 07:40 AM

Welcome to Passions. I do hope you shared this with her.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2006-10-05 08:41 AM

CraigM
I'm sure you show this every day. Welcome to PIP. A lovely poem.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

5 posted 2006-10-05 08:57 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
This is a wonderful entrance piece you have chosen.
A beautiful dedication to your wife..
I look forward to reading more of your words.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

CraigM
Junior Member

since 2006-10-05

Posts 13

6 posted 2006-10-05 09:46 AM

Thankyou for all your kind words. It is my first effort at writing. Hopefully i can write some more in the future.

In the meantime i am going to read others submissions and enjoy the different writing styles and draw inspiration from them.

P.S my wife has not seen the poem yet. I only wrote it yesterday. I will give it to her on her birthday next month.

Thanks again

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2006-10-05 03:03 PM

Craig~
Welcome to PiP~

In paying such lovely word-homage to your wife, you've made a great entrance into this ever-growing circle of poets and friends~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Martie

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California

8 posted 2006-10-05 03:52 PM

I'm sure she loved this tribute...to be a hero. Welcome!

The Shadow in Blue
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since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

9 posted 2006-10-06 08:32 PM

Firstly, a hearty welcome to P.I.P. !

Secondly, fantastic tribute to your wife. It sounds like both of you are really great people. Hope she enjoys this poem.

^_^
~Jill

Triskaidekaphobia
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since 2003-02-05

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In a state of disrepair...

10 posted 2006-10-07 02:25 AM

I must apologise for not replying sooner, Craig, somehow I managed not to notice that this was your first post.
I add my own samll welcome and also my thanks for letting us read this wonderful poem. I think your wife will be very pleased with the present.

I hope to see more from you soon.

"The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun
With Coca Cola clouds behind a Big Mac sun."

One God by The Beautiful South

CraigM
Junior Member

since 2006-10-05

Posts 13

11 posted 2006-10-09 04:35 AM

Thanks for all your comments guys and what a great weclome.

Fantastic site!

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