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Open Poetry #39

Lucifer's stained dress

Triskaidekaphobia
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

0 posted 2006-10-05 05:01 AM

Yes, I remember well
the images made hell.
The creation of distress
in Lucifer's stained dress

And staring at a hand
creates another land
While you float away
in lost serene decay

The notes I see as mine
are echoing through time.
The world it always bends
as liquid soul descends.

Yes, I remember hells
where everybody dwells.
The world it does fluoresce
as lucid seams digress
from Lucifer's stained dress.

[This message has been edited by Triskaidekaphobia (10-06-2006 02:16 PM).]

Refugee
Member

since 2006-08-04

Posts 97

1 posted 2006-10-05 09:44 AM

I can't believe nobody else commented on this.

I really enjoyed the 'hell' out of it. No pun intended.

Great title too.

ManOfWolves28
Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 83

2 posted 2006-10-05 10:08 AM

Kind of reminds me of a gothic film. Like V for Vendetta mixed with some other movie. Further thoughts make me think Carry. Thats a good movie and I assume the books is also good. Youve got some good stuff to read.

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