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When I Asked God (For you, Yess)
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When I Asked God (For you, Yess) |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
...Here we go. I don't like posting more than one poem per day. But this one has a special meaning for me. It's about the person I love and how difficult is for me to take the situation that we can't be toghether and how difficult is for me to understand that maybe, just maybe, i have to wait a little. Once again thank you to all those who supported me on my last poem, thank you for the critics and the advice, thank you deeply. When I Asked God (For you, Yess) My Life Since the Beginning has been nice i had my loved ones which with time unfortunately faded away i had my friends many of them dissapear when i most needed them but some of them stayed showing me what true friendship was Everything was perfect for me until i asked god if he couldn't bring me a new love to bring back that long lost feeling to my heart he gave me a single chance one night to prove if i could tell you what i felt for you i took the chance and we were toghether that night but then you left and we hardly talked what happened? didn't you tell me that you've been waiting for someone like me to appear in your life? why did you change? why did you left me with just a warm kiss in my lips? i fell in love with you i can't forget you since then weeks have passed why don't you tell me what happened? what made you leave? Running from the truth i went and talked to god a night just like when i met you just like the one when you gave me your heart i shouted God! Answer my call! tell me if she is there waiting or if she has found someone else tell me if my yess still loves me. ------------------------------------------------- I know this is long, but it's something i needed to share, as i'm suffering a lot for her...i just needed to share it. thank you for reading Denis. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denis~ Welcome to PiP~ This is a lovely plea .... hoping that if it is meant to be, she returns~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A stirring, and empassioned spill from your heart and onto the page. ~ As you love, may you be loved in return!  Loving Light, Earth Angel |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Hang in there...faith is tough sometimes. Long or not, I enjoyed your posting. Regards, INclan |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
Thank you for reading, and yes..i hope she will come back some day. I'm glad you liked it. thanks again Denis. |
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