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Wind Dancing
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Wind Dancing |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
The sky is bruised tonight Skeletal tree bones strain to grip pastel clouds And drape them into delicate gowns. So, once again, they can go wind dancing. aziza |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lovely writing...I love it when you can picture the words... M |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
I agree with passingshadows: ...wwwwwwWOW!! Loved it, aziza!! Let the dance begin!  ~Moonkist |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I can see the images there in my mind. Nicely done.... |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Alison, Such images! And wonder. Imagine if we could pull down the pastels from a morning fire sky and hang them on trees. Why, it might just look like Autumn! Sending smiles from here in Michigan, where the trees are gilded spirits, mocking the morning sky. Sandra |
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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
Well wow is an accurate description of this piece! Incredibly visual... I can see them! Skeletal tree bones... amazing! "The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Simply beautiful! Hugs~Nancy Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
Incredible, just incredible... i really liked it..I'll keep looking into your work. Congrats!. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Painted poetry panting, pungently poignant, profound pagentry |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh now this is a beauty... |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Very beautiful. I enjoyed this a lot. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you all very much. You know, each of you touched me and made me smile with pleasure at your words. Thank you again, xoxoxo me |
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