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Open Poetry #39

Dreaming My Story

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2006-10-02 11:21 PM

Well, First of all, Thanks again to all those who read "A Dream to Remember", my First Poem.For all those who didn't read it it's under the "My First Poem" Topic.
I didn't Expect my first poem to receive so many warm answers, i'm glad that you could enjoy it And I hope that this one, Titled "Dreaming My Story" Meets your expectations once again.
As you may be guessing, most of my poems are based on dreams. This one happened last night, And goes like this:

Dreaming My Story

I've Heard Many Stories
So Many Already
All of them about Lost Love,
Courage, Eternal Love
and so on

And I've Asked me many times
why i can't live
something like that?
like a little boy
with his Storybook in his hand
dreaming on being a knight

I dreamt living an Adventure
Something Different
Something Strange
Something to Make me Realize
what i feel for you

As Nothing Special
Happened in my life
I decided to Write my Own Story

Many Weeks I Spent
Writing, Thinking
And Dreaming My Story

But After a long Time
I've Realized
That my life was like those Stories
Meeting you was the beginning
Loving you was the Plot
Loosing you and Recovering you
was the Adventure I dreamt
But, as you may be guessing
there is something missing
that's the end of the story
The End that now i want to Discover
by my own.

Will you still be by my side?
Will you Still Love Me?
I Can't Stop Dreaming on the end of it.
I Just Can't Stop
Dreaming My Story

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2006-10-03 12:21 PM

I hope that your story continues and has a very happy ending.

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

2 posted 2006-10-03 01:48 PM

Very nicely done.

But do keep in mind, if you constantly set your sights on the ending,
you miss some wonderful twists and turns in the very middle.

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

3 posted 2006-10-03 03:16 PM

I Understand what you say, and i'll keep it in mind. thanks for reading and for the advice!.

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