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wordwizard
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on the way to next world

0 posted 2006-09-01 06:08 PM


Feel her vibration
language in the middle
fill the dedication
tells of refills
my understanding
she twitches on the move
migrates with the seasons
it's habitual
short skirt above the knees
mid length below.


Feel her vibration
impersonation
interference in between
told with emptied bottles
a change with the season
happens regularly
suddenly
new languages develop...
people shake themselves
stay with an impulse
or rise and leave.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-09-02 09:04 AM



Smiling at the switch of this...



Well done, Martin.


SmartChick
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2 posted 2006-09-02 09:55 AM


Wow! Very well written.
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3 posted 2006-09-02 06:06 PM


I enjoyed reading this...

~Alli~

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-09-03 11:27 PM




very nicely done...


ecrivan
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my own state
5 posted 2006-09-04 01:01 AM


perhaps I'm underestimating my own talent...but that is common anyway


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