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Open Poetry #39

Gathering Light

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

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Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2006-09-30 09:08 PM

It is with sense of urgency, awake to gathering light,
that carries just a hint of chill, a phantoms' touch, so slight,
as to be missed were not in tune with change as we arise
the cycles reach another phase, behold the Monarchs fly.

For in this time of gathering light an unseen hand might steer
the migrants on their ordained course, some part of that's felt here.
Though buried deep, within it shines and harkens to an age,
when wonder would have filled a book instead of one small page.

ChePacifica
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since 2006-09-26

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Ignore Alien Orders

1 posted 2006-09-30 09:27 PM

very cool !

marcel
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since 2003-03-02

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az, usa

2 posted 2006-10-03 12:49 PM

creatively jumbled but smooth flow and rhyme. nice write.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-10-03 07:49 AM

ah, the melancholy of this is beautiful

Moonkist
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since 2006-09-29

Posts 197
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2006-10-03 08:25 AM

Good morning, DrMoose1! May we all be open to the butterflies that wish to soar from within! (There's many wonderful thoughts and images in this piece... must read a few times through!)
Peace,
~Moonkist

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

5 posted 2006-10-03 05:31 PM

I see you're still in therapy Doc, but I must say I really enjoyed your poem.

Martie

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6 posted 2006-10-03 06:36 PM

Doc...you have made beautiful my favorite time of day...and as always, well!

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