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Lady In White
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0 posted 2006-09-29 11:05 AM



O Factor

common enough
an oh sound

until it meets a factoring
smattering, pattering
presence

with wide thought lent
and ever adore
sent

supping on mind dreams
ceded upon request

nosh with me
then

there

with us, where
O sounds

become you.

write with grace, all others lose face;
"Jo was very tall, thin, ... and reminded one of a colt..." LMA

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Martie
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1 posted 2006-09-29 11:10 AM


Lady...it's been too long since you visited....Oh, what a pleasure to read you!
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-09-29 11:41 AM


ms white
the o sounds
long o
vowel of pleasure here

Kira Aso
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3 posted 2006-09-29 12:01 PM


It really is wonderful to read your work!
Lovely as usual.

Magnus
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4 posted 2006-09-29 07:21 PM


You have been missed....and you are
quite the artist, aren't you?

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5 posted 2006-09-29 07:26 PM



Lady In White
really beautiful
and so round...

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6 posted 2006-09-30 12:50 PM


O, I like.

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7 posted 2006-09-30 01:44 AM


You know, I adore this, as I was raised in oh!  The reading teacher in me loves the many puzzles you inserted...  Thank you!!!
Very, very much enjoyed.

misce'

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8 posted 2006-09-30 09:48 AM


except for being raised in OH,I had the same reaction as  misce'...

nice to be reading you again


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9 posted 2006-09-30 10:11 AM


You pleasure me this morning, Lady....and oh, how welcome it is.......

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10 posted 2006-09-30 12:47 PM


Your graceful writing got an O from me, Lady.
Thank you.
Hugs,
Ethel


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11 posted 2006-10-02 02:28 PM


...as is the O face. Wonderful to behold.

Beautiful poetry.

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12 posted 2006-10-02 02:45 PM


nice....like the text
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