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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-09-04 12:19 PM


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Scent of Companionship

04 September 2006


Where was fatherhood
if you were a man
This angle of posting mail
just to know the
letter was in the box

For without the woman
there would be neither man
Without that love
the void does exist

That scent of companionship
the relationship of mother and child
All those months of delivery to birth
so what was parenthood in the man’s worth

To live, to die, no issue to account
the publication cancelled
The tree no longer to seed
No words, not birth in certification borne
just a blankness on a family tree to read


“Nevertheless neither is the man without the woman,
neither the woman without the man, in the Lord.
For as the woman is of the man, even so is the
man also by the woman; but all things of God.”
1 Corinthians 11: 11-12KJV


© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares


© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-09-26 11:56 PM


If I were writing the questions to ask arriving souls at the gate of heaven, I think three of them would be:

Did you partake of the pleasures of life, so that you could be fulfilled, and bless the people around you with happiness?

Did you share where sharing would uplift, and help where help could be given?

And I also would ask....

Did you love a child?

There might be others I'd ask, but I know those three would be high on the list.

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poettothecars
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2 posted 2006-09-27 01:42 AM


I do not know how you found this poem, that must have been way down the page some where. But I am more than glad you did, because the day I composed the above works, something indeed happened.

And maybe for a good reason, sure there was a connection, only this one could indeed be life changing. Thus perhaps that desire to be finally a husband and a father, may yet be the poets reality, and not his downfall.

a poet who cares

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