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0 posted 2006-09-28 02:18 AM



... as you took the last stroke ...
              ... it resonated in my head ...
                ... the decay is too long ...


     ... trapped ...

           ... feelings are ...

                  ...

                    ...
... sound ...

        ... covered ears / closed eyes ...
                ... none for the wicked ...

      ... for sleep leads to no sound ...

             ... absence of body ...

       ... fullness of mind ...

                          ... dreams are the enemy ...


© Copyright 2006 Alex-lee Hryhorczuk - All Rights Reserved
william foos
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1 posted 2006-09-28 10:36 AM


dreams are my best friends
for with them i can travel
far or near
or be who i want
with a stroke and the mind fails
who is to say
what lies far beyond that bridge
unless we have returned
from that other side


keep doing well
love the papa

i see what i write and write what i see

Triskaidekaphobia
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2 posted 2006-09-29 09:21 AM


WOW! I say again WOW!

Just WOW!

That's in my library now.

"The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun
With Coca Cola clouds behind a Big Mac sun."

One God by The Beautiful South

Kira Aso
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Closer to Hell...
3 posted 2006-09-30 09:31 PM


Yep WOW seems to sum it up!

Really loved!!!

ChePacifica
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4 posted 2006-09-30 09:34 PM


I like the way this is formatted as well as the content - we eat with our eyes as well as our mouth....lol
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5 posted 2006-10-04 01:21 AM


Thanks! It's been awhile since I've written anything!!!

I was just in the mood and felt compelled to speak my mind...

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