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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-09-26 06:35 AM



It's nice to hear those words
  when whispered through the air.
Nicer still experienced
  when hanging, minded there ...


And there and there in memory,
  each thought a touch of you.
Yes, it's nice to hear those words when meant,
  that carry my day through.


And even if I hold mine back
  they're there just waiting for
The time when next we're face to face...
  those words and so much more.


M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-09-26 08:27 AM


this gave the feeling of a will of the wisp...delicate, delightful, peaceful thoughts....

nice write Lady

Enchantress
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2 posted 2006-09-26 09:26 AM


Maureen this is so lovely!
Nice to walk though the day with those thoughts.
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2006-09-26 09:38 AM


ILY ~ I Love You ~ Words that surely sweeten the air and our hearts.

"The time when next we're face to face...
  those words and so much more."

~ and so much more...

Love-ly write, M,


Linda

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4 posted 2006-09-26 11:30 AM


good to read you

this made me smile

Refugee
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5 posted 2006-09-26 12:29 PM


I too, love the ending.
It says it all.


"The time when next we're face to face...
  those words and so much more."

Magnus
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6 posted 2006-09-26 06:48 PM


You did very well with this M.  Love the
lines, the ending...all of it.

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