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dream too (duet with Dark Stranger)
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dream too (duet with Dark Stranger) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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to dream in black print sauce in a white bowl well mixed overflowing the glisten speak of mind waters blending with oils of night ink spend smarts of eyes hand covered sound zips past an ear shhh let me hear the shiver of it nerve endings so exquisitely tuned the gypsy strums a violin with wind mirrors of clouds are the echo's mouths chanting their prayers butterfly flaps a wing in chile causing trembling confused speech halfway ‘round the world laughter hands full of tears lightly lifted more? as colors of rainbows with wing boundaries what god draws circles there on the wound of tears when the shadows dance their undulations under forgotten oceans tides without moons to guide their confusion no dammit no no yes more please more lying across thumb soothing cry mouth lip fit to lip warm belly spoon sleep to dream once more in black print there is the yawning dawn on tomorrow's train arriving on schedule predictable like the empty tracks behind when look backs rewind but become memories again playing with themselves slowly forward |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ahhhhhhhh 2 of my favs write together and spin gold |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yesssssssssssssss....  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
from two of my favorite poets! Brava! |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
'Bouts time, my friends! Well done |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Very entertaining, enjoyed. Both of you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
EXQUISITE!! BRAVA!! May I ask for more? Hugs to you both~Nancy ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This was a wonder full to ear and mouth!!  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice, even hard to pick out one from the other...You have been studying and working hard at it....Excellent Duet. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you very much Helen… yessssss indeed Karilea… thank you thank you Gentle Spirit! Sandra thank you so much… Sir Sy I appreciate you always… thank you so much Nancy! hugs to you… thank you Martie… I’m glad you enjoyed it such a nice thing to say Barry thank you |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
pipgang, thanks to each of you so much..and to ladyone, thank you for putting my word thorns into such a lovely vase. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
 this seems with many faces, many pens...feeling quit the same way, but never expressed so magnificantly... bravo!!!! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Quite simply -- Yay!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
don't know how I missed this one yesterday but glad I saw it today |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
LeeJ you see so clearly thank you my dear Stranger you are much too modest thank you for the word flowers not a thorn among them… thanks for the yay aziza  thank you passing shadows… |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Bravo! This is a thing of beauty. |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Very Lovely! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Ed... Kira thanks! |
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amberhues Member
since 2006-11-01
Posts 93 |
A lovely duet! |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Very good, and what an interesting voice you two have!! |
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writergrl Member
since 2006-10-30
Posts 73Las Vegas, Nevada |
you both fit together so well, as one heart and one voice...lovely, brava! "You cannot stain a black coat." |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you amberhues glad you enjoyed it Monklet...  thank you writergrl |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
It really does not get much better than this. Love you both, A |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Don't know hwo I missed this ... I really need to spend more time here....I go years in between...I thought it flowed very neatly!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Angel as I recall it wrote itself with ease |
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