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Fork in the road
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Fork in the road |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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as i lay with you snuggled up oh so tight and i battle inside to put up a fight i see your eyes as they look upon my face but the look you had that one nite has left your face psyhoctic notions of crystal color dreams of dif paths forks in the roads shattered dreams broken promises tears flow blood drips down the hands upon time are amougnst me and time to make a choice that you already have mad. so so very easy which makes me feel bad inside when yours is so far away yet YOU know what you want inside and mine is close to me at nite yet its you whom i have in my mind at times. is this right or is this wrong is this the same old damn dance and song? Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx for sharing this Julie....kinda like two people standing on opposite sides of the street...waiting for the don't walk to turn to walk... I wonder who will be first? |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
yes  but writting helps me decide what the heck to dohappiness always comes at a price Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
yeah he said it best with the crosswalk thing, he hit it dead on with that Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
nice to know people get my twisted mind Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I am just sitting here -- thinking about your poem. That's a good thing. I was thinking about the different paths and that we can't even look back when we stop sharing the same road to walk on. I know that probably makes no sense to anyone else, but I got lost in thought over it. Thank you for this excellent poem. aziza |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
ty im glad you enjoyed it Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Loved the poem, it has a lot of questioning emotions of which path to take. |
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