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hymn # 93 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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why was I the surrealist dancing my fancy boots round with the laces in dishevel worshiping other people's gods and going home alone it was much easier to teach the giraffe to swim once he saw the bathtub was not so deep as I predicted and his neck could still be out so you could see his colors when you brought buckets of sun and washed him carefully down using only your hands and slippery fingers and although you ignored me in my cellophane lathering you did brush against my mind with your busy hips at times when serving mangos to the eyes of those flat screen movie stars _____________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Jeez, what did you eat last night?  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun..just reading greek bibles backwards I do that sometimes to get my sanity back thanks ms |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You mean, there is a way to get one's sanity back.....geez...why didn'tcha tell me sooner.... Enjoyed your words this morning D. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*laughing* @ your reply... keerg! elbib! Frankly I'm surprised you survived at all.  tnigautpes? Don't try that with the gnostic gospels buddy, it's like pulling the stopper out whiles ye sit in the tub! Yer goin' DOWN.  but then, you're always up for down, ain't ya? *battin' lashes* ah, my kindred spirit...MUAH  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs..thanks little lady friend _____________ serene one, I have memorized most of the agnostic gospels ...but am rewriting them to be more user unfriendly, I am currently spending much of my time in leviticus creating stronger penalties. thanks otherhalf |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yanno? I woke up totally ticked off this morning too.  Thanks D, for helping me to get over mahself. so funny you... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms serene..my pressure (wink) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Your hymn has brushed against my mind....and although you don't always call it a hymn, I usually like the sound.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thank you little neighbor, you bless me |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
I read this as my mind was perched on the rim of some dreaded place, and I smiled and stepped back. Thanking you for filling the hollow with lightness. Sandra |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sandra, thank you for staying for awhile and letting it sooth |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I clearly understand the giraffe's caution Stranger going all the way under can be dangerous better to keep your neck out... I like it |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You certainly do have our attention today. You really have done all of that? Wow! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW! Just WOW!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady one, he turns out to be a great swimmer afterall..thanks for looking in ms ___________ friend Magnus, well not completely memorized..just the picture sections really (grin) thanks guy ______________ ms e...your have such cute wows, thanks for them |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
Do you take from Ezra? I am the two-toed wanderer |
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