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WindWalker
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0 posted 2006-09-24 10:52 PM


What is compassion?
Is it a feeling?
Something one does for someone else?
Simply a “virtue” seen in those
one would call “good people”?

Perhaps that is how it manifests
when we observe it;
when we try to practice it
but that is not what it is.

Compassion
is a language known to all
who call themselves “intelligent”
sentient, self-aware beings.
Perhaps we could call it
the language of the Universe
from the depths of the Cosmos.

Another way of looking at it:
compassion –  
The greatest expression
of Universal love
and on earth, love in action.

Perhaps compassion
was the language of the gods,
those who created the worlds
(and us!)
and perhaps they left it as a choice,
whether we would use it or not.

Perhaps it is that legacy
we lost to the vagaries of time
when the difficulties came
and we chose survival
over love.

If it’s as simple as that
how simple it is
to get back into it once more
and make the Earth
dance in joy.

© Copyright 2006 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-09-24 11:04 PM


Some interesting thoughts to ponder.
quote:
when the difficulties came
and we chose survival
over love

But survival doesn't require we negate or abandon love. In fact, I hope it demands love as a core requirement.
Good to read you again.

The Lady
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2 posted 2006-09-24 11:09 PM




"If it’s as simple as that
how simple it is
to get back into it once more
and make the Earth
dance in joy."

would that it were that simple
does it seem to you
we slide farther away
daily?

provocative work WindWalker...


ecrivan
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3 posted 2006-09-25 12:33 PM


compassion...
in a void of tension
a brief thought occurred
when someone tried to cross
rivers of danger
drowned,
a homonid thought
that came and went
as soon as currents
engulfed calls of distress..
crocs dined on ancestral flesh
pre-humans mused
dangers of the depths
survivors became
aware of mortality
survival meant displacement



passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2006-09-25 01:34 AM


excellent!
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2006-09-25 09:17 AM


I always enjoy the acute questioning mind you possess.
An excellent depiction of this quandry.
Well written.

Emotional response?
We are more than the sum of our respective parts.  Vision is internal, and external...the ability to hear within is fate's way of steering the ship.


Magnus
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6 posted 2006-09-25 05:06 PM


Lots of interesting thoughts....You have
never been one to mince words or hold back
a thought.

Is the Meadow still an open site?  Haven't
been there in several years.

WindWalker
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7 posted 2006-09-25 07:02 PM


Thank you all for your comments!!!! Magnus the Meadow is still an open site.

aziza
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8 posted 2006-09-26 12:43 PM


You wrote poetry that is so lovely and so thought-provoking.  What a magical combination!

aziza

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
9 posted 2006-09-26 10:09 AM


I appreciate a good enquiring mind, and you, Dear Poet, have one!

Compassion makes the world go 'round, unfortunately, it is often in short supply.

Loving Light,
EA


LeeJ
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10 posted 2006-09-26 11:30 AM


lovely and many good thoughts to ponder...to place as a keepsake of words...

Bravo!!!!!

WindWalker
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11 posted 2006-09-27 07:17 PM


Again thank you all for your comments!!!!
FNG
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12 posted 2006-09-29 05:54 AM


Intriguing thoughts..

Enjoyed.

Compassion.
A choice to exercise it or not.


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