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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-09-24 07:36 AM



sky of shisan
dark as the raven wing
with a single diamond
jutting nude side down

dancer of bronze shadows
I hear your ferver
when the magic wand touches
and you are healed slowly

as the sun gallops to my eyes
just to hover heaven
over the end of my prayers
I worship your seam's shimmering

of your willing wickedness
but you remain behind the glass
with hand prints in vapor
and the reach of my salvation

is teased with photos of candles

_____________

daark



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seraphin
Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
1 posted 2006-09-24 08:29 AM


Dark, this is really beautiful. A keeper, and that is a fact.

Sandra

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2006-09-24 08:32 AM



There is a primal, raw ache
that feeds on colors such
as these...

a good way to start the morning.

Thank you.


The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2006-09-24 07:39 PM




sometimes Stranger
you pen just goes
all lovely
and soft...

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