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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-09-23 04:06 AM


I don't know.
We spill these words,
passion emanating,
but still are they heard?
Sometimes, it all seems trite,
self indulgent at best
as if poets should put their angst to rest.
These words come from somewhere,
these words we spill.
I don't know.
Do my emotions they tell?
Perhaps, I just over analyze
looking for a way to self intellectualize
the thoughts and feelings
that seem to over flow
Where do they all come from?
I don’t know.

aziza

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seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
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1 posted 2006-09-23 08:31 AM


They come from a place in the mind and heart that is reserved for those who see the world with compassion. The words come from Poets, and you are one of the best.
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2006-09-23 08:31 AM


good thoughts here aziza

the poet's heart and mind are mystical sometimes

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2006-09-23 11:01 PM




"Where do they all come from?
I don’t know"

neither do I aziza
but I like 'em
keep spilling...

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