navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #39 » Small Scale Cosa Nostra
Open Poetry #39
Post A Reply Post New Topic Small Scale Cosa Nostra Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
MukkaKukka
Member
since 2006-09-18
Posts 88
Finland

0 posted 2006-09-21 06:40 PM



In his time

My father was sort of a mobman.

Today he listens to an old man

Snoring next door.

© Copyright 2006 Petri Pokkinen - All Rights Reserved
Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
1 posted 2006-09-21 06:42 PM


even the baddest of the bad are humbled at some point, nice write

Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2006-09-21 06:50 PM


MukkaKukka
So it is written.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2006-09-21 07:30 PM


Enjoyed...James
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2006-09-21 08:33 PM


well written!
MukkaKukka
Member
since 2006-09-18
Posts 88
Finland
5 posted 2006-09-21 08:44 PM


you know Passingshadows I`s wond`rin`

which one is you in that picture

the girl with the lovely smile

or the more enigmatic one?

MukkaKukka
Member
since 2006-09-18
Posts 88
Finland
6 posted 2006-09-21 08:47 PM


Oh sorry I gotmistaken

When I wrote I saw the girl without glasses smilin`

with full teeth but then she really didn`t

Dostoevskian ain`t it?

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
7 posted 2006-09-21 10:58 PM




good work MukkaKukka...

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #39 » Small Scale Cosa Nostra

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary