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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-09-20 07:13 AM



funny songs in the rain
the squeaking of red
tennis shoes
on marble ballrooms

and a lady in gauze
with folded arms
but you move them aside
and say it is ok

if my eyes dry your breasts
as long as they hurry
before you get cold
and want the rest of me

to be your blanket
on the beach there
of a morning window
with the glass on our skin

and the wind as our witness

_____________

daark

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seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
1 posted 2006-09-20 07:54 AM


"funny songs in the rain
the squeaking of red
tennis shoes
on marble ballrooms"

Where is your mind on this morning, Dark friend? Loved this, the mental picture and where it leads.

Sandra

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-09-20 09:32 AM


to be your blanket
on the beach there
of a morning window
with the glass on our skin

and the wind as our witness

gloriously submissive...
beautifully written

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
3 posted 2006-09-20 10:18 AM


ms sandra...even the fancy shoes squeak in fancy places..when under the influence of wet..thanks for the eyes ms

___________

ms leej, a willing master perhaps, thank you ms

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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4 posted 2006-09-20 08:42 PM


the wind is a voyeaur
  that hears the whispers
    oh dark one, when you dance,
           to her majik melody.


Niiicee one big guy...

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
5 posted 2006-09-20 09:35 PM




oh
I like that blanket
Stranger...


Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
6 posted 2006-09-21 06:59 AM


ms gs, thanks so much lady friend

___________

ladyone, thanks ms, a drapery of soothsin

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