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First Dance!
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First Dance! |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA 
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First Dance! Fire leaping drums are pounding keeping time to Mothers heart beat,starlight sparks in midnight eyes heritage as old as time. Spirits speaking to each other draw her forward looking for him,dark skin in the firelight glowing moving forward flutes are calling. There is a stillness on the air quiet excitement as all prepare,tonight for the first time she will dance reaching out for him to join her. Her heart still fearful hoping he will be here,can she stir the warriors blood,will he accept her hopeful love? Now the time she moves forward body swaying feet are moving,eyes close then slowly open he is there and she becons with her hands in a dance old as time. All now is quiet waiting breathless then he smiles and in the dance he joins her,before all he has accepted the love she offers. Joy fills her being all she ever dreamed of is finally coming true,as they dance the ancient Dance of Courtship for everyone to see!
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Fire leaping drums are pounding keeping time to Mothers heart beat,starlight sparks in midnight eyes heritage as old as time. ... Joy fills her being all she ever dreamed of is finally coming true,as they dance the ancient Dance of Courtship for everyone to see! ~*~ From first, to last a beautiful dance!  |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Honestly I would have loved to be the man in the women arms. The dance of this poem moved my eyes from line to line. ~Bill |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
From first, to last a beautiful dance! Sigi Eladitlv ulv! Once it was this way for the maidens,their chosen gifted the chance to join them in a dance as beautiful as life.As time passes so very much is lost,but this,ahhhh...,oh no never! I wish for you that chance as well to dance when ever you hear the music!
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Honestly I would have loved to be the man in the women arms. The dance of this poem moved my eyes from line to line. ~Bill Sigi oginali,from what I have read of your writing you would do her great honor! blessings!
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A very captivating write Granny. I hope to read more about the culture of the Tsalgi. believe in what your heart feels... |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
A very captivating write Granny. I hope to read more about the culture of the Tsalgi. believe in what your heart feels... Sigi Scorpio I am most honored by your words,as well deeply grateful for the acceptance found here for the sharing of both ideas and ways of life. Tsalagi is all I know and so if allow to continue here will share what is mine to share of my Peoples! blessings!
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Excellent 'write'! I consider it a really significant "New Year's" blessing for 2007... that this author is going to continue to post on this website! again, much applause! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Your words do much justice to the "dance of courtship" which I consider to be one of our greatest miracles. Much enjoyed! |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Excellent 'write'! I consider it a really significant "New Year's" blessing for 2007... that this author is going to continue to post on this website! again, much applause! Sigi Secondhanddreamerpoet my heart thanks you,it is to me a great blessing to be among such wonderful people as are here,good loving people who reach beyond themselves to welcome someone so very different. You can not know vigido how deeply this affects me,I offer most humbly what is mine to share here among such great minds. blessings!
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Your words do much justice to the "dance of courtship" which I consider to be one of our greatest miracles. Much enjoyed! O'siyo HoneyBunch Dto hi tsu? Hitsalagi? Sigi for your kindness!
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