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The restless sea
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The restless sea |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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The restless sea of all I feel stares at the awesome blue in mind to strip to naked the body of its soul and throw aside the veil of time that hides the love inside. But in the stretch and reach of one made physical no yoga pose can hold and cosset so the powerhouse of a lover’s soul ~ and I mourn this circumstance like a woman separated from the reason for her being. Restless sea, oh, restless sea, look how you ripple smooth and toss within the need to be satisfied while the sky in calm repose smiles down like to a child playing hopscotch in a void of intelligence. And the sea, the sea of feel, breathes in, breathes in, you see and exhales upon a sigh the shortsightedness of sky! Helen / 15 September 2006 [This message has been edited by Honeybunch (09-15-2006 08:25 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Helen, you put the 'P' in 'poetess'. This a graceful and exceptionally emotive piece of writing. "and I mourn this circumstance like a woman separated from the reason for her being." ~ You have the ability to bring the reader into your world. Sending you a loving, comforting hug and a pat on the back for this outstanding display of your talent! Linda |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Linda - thank you so much for your supportive comment! Think you can lift the sea to the sky the way you uplift all who read you? Bet you can!  Hugs to you, dear earth angel of light! Helen |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This needs a bump up. I totally agree with Earth Angel's assessment of this....it is graceful and flows so naturally.  ....jo |
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