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twinkyfl1
Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 133
florida

0 posted 2006-12-22 07:07 PM

You've nothing for a heart
But stone
And you deserve to
be alone.

You think you're perfect
And oh so nice
But everyone knows you're
Made of ice.

You're really dead, you're
Not for real
Yet hearts you crush
With claws of steel.

One day you'll have
To pay the cost
For all you stole
From those that lost.

And when your body's as
Dead as your heart
And from this world you
Do depart.

Don't look to God to
Call for you
'Cause Satan is going
To carry you.

To the bottomless pit
Of Hell below
Where you'll finally reap
Just what you sow.

To thy own self be true

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2006-12-22 08:30 PM

Dang June Marie,
I thought that was up to God! Hmmm Though he did say "by their fruits you shall know them". Just a little bit of fruit inspection going on here. Intense write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-12-22 10:43 PM

intense yeah

but I know

twinkyfl1
Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 133
florida

3 posted 2006-12-23 12:03 PM

Dear Larry,

Out of all the poems I've written, this is the only angry one. I guess everyone has their breaking point.

I have to admit though, I felt very good when I was done.

Have a Merry and Blessed Christmas.

To thy own self be true

twinkyfl1
Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 133
florida

4 posted 2006-12-23 12:08 PM

Dixie, yeah, but the real intensity came from the relief I felt when I finished writing it.

Have a great yule time season.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

5 posted 2006-12-23 12:25 PM

June Marie,
No apologies required. I've got a few of similar vein myself. Hope I didn't offend.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2006-12-23 12:36 PM

Very intense but well written!
Happy Holidays!

twinkyfl1
Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 133
florida

7 posted 2006-12-23 02:44 PM

Larry, you could never offend me. We're kindred souls, remember?

twinkyfl1
Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 133
florida

8 posted 2006-12-23 02:46 PM

Thank you so much Enchantress.

Happy Holidays to you!

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