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spiked4 Junior Member
since 2006-12-07
Posts 35Hammond, La |
The flicker of the candlelight Shadows cast this rainy night with heavy heart we wait our time and draw your bath in to find a place where i have yet to touch subtleness not very much a gesture of a love in mend or simply playing out its end an aromatic sense in blend with hope and amid confusion quietly i walk you still into this room which candles fill and help you in this sauna made to take your stress away now lying in a facial mask a gentle wash no hidden task i clense your mind for this one night only offer some delight no sex nothing beyond what you see just pleasant time for us to be a little more in tune with one a memory to share in latter time remember this as just some pure romantic bliss and carry it instead of pain a memory to help contain the bitterness of love. [This message has been edited by spiked4 (12-22-2006 04:08 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like a wonderful time |
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spiked4 Junior Member
since 2006-12-07
Posts 35Hammond, La |
Thank you passing shadows |
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navybound New Member
since 2007-08-30
Posts 1 |
Hey dad. beautiful work. they wouldnt let me read these if i didnt join so...... I Love You, Joshua Rendall |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joshua~ Welcome ! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you all so much and Josh never thought you read my stuff truely a nice find. |
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