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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Snow falls slowly Through frigid air To lie upon an open field There is an old house now With a single lamp yet on A tall wide pine in the front yard Deer still move in the woods nearby Occasionally the clouds above Will part to reveal a stolid moon A night owl calls The lights of that village Left behind so long ago Reflect and glitter On the silent bay . [This message has been edited by Huan Yi (12-19-2006 10:20 AM).] |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
You portrayed a nice scene here. ~Bill |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perfection! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like the stillness here, and the way the moon is stolid. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
poetry at it's best...you write with heart my friend. jwesley |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thank you all I write in soliloquy or apostrophes directed to someone not here which seems generally unattractive to comment. Thanks again. John |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah beautifully penned... RDB |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Sensitivity of huge pixel get best picture. |
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