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twinkyfl1
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0 posted 2006-12-16 07:54 PM


Silently the snow falls down
In crystal, lace-like flakes
And all along the cold, hard ground
A fluffy blanket makes.

It's like a virgin, pure and white
It makes the whole world clean
To a child it's sheer delight
For us, a time to dream.

Of sitting by the fire
Hot cocoa in our hand
Of walking all alone we two
Through winters wonderland.

To gather 'round the Christmas tree
Its lights upon us beam
To be right here, all safe and warm
To dream a winters dream.


To thy own self be true

© Copyright 2006 junemarie roldan - All Rights Reserved
Draugluin
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1 posted 2006-12-16 08:45 PM


I love watching the first snow fall, with my family. loved the poem , always love the feeling fresh and long awaited snowfall brings.
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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2006-12-16 09:08 PM


This is just lovely.
Much enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2006-12-16 09:11 PM


twinkyfl1
A delight to read, enjoyed.

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-12-17 12:02 PM



you have covered me with
white lace-like flakes
and put hot cocoa in my hand

beautiful junemarie

passing shadows
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5 posted 2006-12-17 12:49 PM


oooooo I love this!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2006-12-17 01:15 AM


enjoyed... RDB
twinkyfl1
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since 2006-12-15
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7 posted 2006-12-17 05:11 AM


Draugluin.."always love the feeling fresh and long awaited snowfall brings."

Thanks for sharing. I couldn't agree with you more. It's magical isn't it?
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Chris..Thank you, I'm deeply honored that you find my work lovely.
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Sy, you made my day, I'm glad that my piece delighted you.
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Lovely Lady.."you have covered me with
white lace-like flakes
and put hot cocoa in my hand"

It's the least I can do for someone as wonderful as you.

To thy own self be true

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