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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2006-12-16 11:17 AM


       Time’s Stranger

In shuttered rooms
where sunlight shakes the soul
‘mid shadow-riddles spinning
tales of life’s regrets
and hopes torn all asunder
in kisses lost...
to the mists of time,
what dreams may rise
from the ash and scent
of burnt roses
in the endless cycle
of love's renewal?
'True’ love is
but time’s stranger...

always sought...
seldom found...
forever moving on!...


© Copyright 2006 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-12-16 12:21 PM


"'True’ love is
but time’s stranger...

always sought...
seldom found...
forever moving on!..."

Haunting in their sadness..these words you write.
But so true.
Excellent piece here Bruce..
You speak your heart.

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2006-12-16 02:35 PM


Bruce,
Well done enjoyed the read.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2006-12-16 06:12 PM


don't know why..but this  inspired these words:
In the passing of time
wounds may heal
but scars remain to remind
the writes of passage


M

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Gaia
4 posted 2006-12-16 06:44 PM


"always sought...
seldom found...
forever moving on!..."

smiling
knowing the operative word here is
seldom
as opposed to never


The Lady
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5 posted 2006-12-16 11:44 PM




"forever moving on!..."

oh how this line grabs me

great work poet

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