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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-12-15 07:16 AM



we went there again this first time
to that tomorrow with drawers
and secrets full of dreams

it was fun like kids know how
to undress the dresser of finery
and play with two people there

that looked like us in the mirror
but weren't us really caring
two someone else's without nervous

doing things with their hands and minds
that made them fit together better
making those sounds on the glass

with the openings of their soul sides
and glancing at us every now and then
with amber in their eyes wondering

why we didn't join in and help them

_______________

daark

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-12-15 07:37 AM


I find this inspirational, yes
Sunshine
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2 posted 2006-12-15 07:51 AM



A bit of Alice's mirror...
and a little dream speak...

yes, this suits Friday's drawers...




LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-12-15 07:55 AM


we went there again this first time
to that tomorrow with drawers
and secrets full of dreams


always fulfilling these secrets full of dreamscapes...lovely write

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2006-12-15 08:09 AM


This brought a smile to my Friday bigD...
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2006-12-15 09:05 AM


ms dixie, thank you for your eyes and mind moments, you truely bless me

_____________

ms sun, thank you for coffee sip smiles today

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ms Leej, thank you pretty mind woman for the touch

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ms gs, donna with smiles, thank you for the mind hug here

The Lady
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6 posted 2006-12-15 11:19 PM




"secrets full of dreams"

nice night time read
Stranger darlin'
taking it to bed with me


Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2006-12-16 07:49 AM


ladyone, yes please, it would bless me thanks
nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2006-12-16 08:08 AM


"we went there again this first time
to that tomorrow with drawers
and secrets full of dreams"

always loved the soft side of you~~

M

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2006-12-16 12:13 PM


ms MMs and I your soft side too, thanks babe
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2006-12-17 12:33 PM


just wonderful! - your words are very dreamy Mr Dark! RDB x
Edward Grim
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11 posted 2006-12-17 12:35 PM


Groovy write man. Really deep ya know, real tight. Right on brother.   Cheerios     - Edweird

And I said to the devil, "You better leave my spleen alone."

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2006-12-17 08:12 AM


ms B, thanks lady!!


_____________

ed, thank you for the read

rwood
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13 posted 2006-12-17 12:06 PM


inno-sin-escent
pleasures

write color, too

your word art is damn fine, D

love,
Reg

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2006-12-18 06:59 AM


ms wood, you pleasure my mind with your love leaves, thanks babe
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