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Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2006-12-06 03:55 PM

Soft days of innocence,
gone, gone to the wind,
to the hard stone
of contemporary, of now.
Care for nought, no love
of life, only gain.
Perhaps the change may
return on the wind?
Blowing back beauty and
flying with it, innocence,
respect, hope and love?

At the touch of love, everyone becomes poets. Plato 427 BC-348.

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

1 posted 2006-12-06 04:03 PM

Very nice write. Enjoyed this poem
~Bill

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

stevepoet
Junior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 46

2 posted 2006-12-06 04:20 PM

lets hope.....very good,I liked the flow to the poem.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-12-06 04:22 PM

"Perhaps the change may
return on the wind?"

excellent write!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2006-12-06 06:05 PM

I like the way that you write your thoughts.
Well done indeed.
hugs, Chris

Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2006-12-06 06:17 PM

I would wish this to be possible. Nicely said.
Sandra

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2006-12-06 07:24 PM

wonderful write! RDB

Edward Grim
Senior Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina

7 posted 2006-12-06 08:15 PM

The best way to describe this piece is also the first word of the poem: Soft. A touching little poem here. Quite nice, cheers - Ed

And I said to the devil, "You better leave my spleen alone."

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2006-12-06 11:45 PM

perhaps indeed

lovely piece

lightkeeper
Member

since 2006-09-13

Posts 100
pluto

9 posted 2006-12-07 09:17 AM

xxx Phil xxx

             Nothing is ever lost for good... simply misplaced ..... the change of wind brings new direction and fresh hope ... open your heart and fill your lungs and never lose faith xxxx

     With warm kisses and tender love
           Bernadette xxx

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

10 posted 2006-12-07 02:08 PM

Innocence returns with the adventure of learning things anew....

Adventure returns when hearts open and dare to wish... to dream.. and to share with others.

Keep dreaming... and by all means.. keep sharing.

Excellent write.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

11 posted 2006-12-09 01:51 AM

Blowing back beauty and
flying with it, innocence,
respect, hope and love....if only the world could return to the days of innocence

Can't ask for anything more, those lines say it all...

Hope you and yours have a BLESSED CHRISTMAS!

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