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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-09-12 07:29 AM



the momentary
slow stretch of time
over the opening of maybe
when strangers become familiar

for just moments on tiptoes
not afraid of the fall
or sudden conclusions
of experience

pressing mind mouths
to the pretending glass
so both can see the hidden
and can feel the need

stirring the clawing agony
of trying to get in
and on and around
the empty memory

and wearing it with gloves on
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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-09-12 07:38 AM



A delatteful wake-up sip.
Good morning, Sir.


Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2006-09-12 07:44 AM


stirring the clawing agony
of trying to get in
and on and around
the empty memory


Dontcha just hate when the darn cups empty?
Morning Dark, enjoyed you here.

seraphin
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3 posted 2006-09-12 07:45 AM


"the momentary
slow stretch of time
over the opening of maybe
when strangers become familiar"

particularly appropriate, striking a chord here on this rainy morning while I sit wondering if maybe I fell off my tip-toes last eve.

Sandra

LeeJ
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4 posted 2006-09-12 08:44 AM


the momentary
slow stretch of time
over the opening of maybe
when strangers become familiar

possiblities are astounding...

and so is your poetry

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2006-09-12 09:45 AM


ms sun, thank you lady friend

_____________

ms gs, you bring me smiles thank you

____________

ms sandra, not to worry about your tiptoes
just know you are standing lovely, thanks lady

_____________

ms leej, slow hugs gentle one, thank you

aziza
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6 posted 2006-09-12 11:07 AM


Iwannalatte!

(smiles)

And, your poem is as good as a latte to wake up to.

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2006-09-12 11:09 AM


ms az, so glad to wear your eye wakes, thanks lady
Klassy Lassy
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8 posted 2006-09-12 02:40 PM


Instauration:  I know this word innately, just have never heard it before.  You are stirring the bottom of the mug this morning.  Sometimes glass is good.  

:squeeze;  ~K

Martie
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9 posted 2006-09-12 02:52 PM


DS

To feel the gentle touch of a gloved hand...a stranger can be safe within a new friend.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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10 posted 2006-09-12 03:07 PM




some memories can only be handled
with gloves Stranger…
some things that are happening
at this moment too

may I have a machiato please?


Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
11 posted 2006-09-12 03:34 PM


ms kl, thanks lady friend for the peek in

_____________

ms martie, thank you little neighbor for the glove touch

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ladyone, hurry to the counter
it is on the top shelf
and I am on the bottom, thanks lady

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