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LukeatNFFC
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0 posted 2006-12-04 11:31 AM


People are emotionally blind,
Who cannot see
When others hurt inside,
And all the while
We walk, Paralysed,
Past the cataclysm
Of a tortured mind.

© Copyright 2006 Luke - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-12-04 11:50 AM


Luke~
Yes sometimes they are ...
yet often those who hurt mask it too well
and in the masking they hide the hurt
so that a friend cannot reach in to help~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2006-12-06 12:06 PM


Yes.  But sometimes all we can do is walk on and try not to stumble.  I like this poem, it made me think.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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3 posted 2006-12-06 12:37 PM


I must agree with Marge here
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2006-12-06 10:04 PM


I like this Luke... hopefully people don't always walk on   RDB
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5 posted 2006-12-06 10:07 PM


Luke, this does happen so often, I'm sad to say.
Yet, as Marge said, sometimes people hide their
true feelings so well that others don't have
a clue they're hurting indide. I KNOW this!!
Hugs,
Ethel

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