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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. So busy last night— the old cat yawns in mid-afternoon . Under summer moon— wholly concerned with food and love— fireflies . The small dog suddenly brave stalks a beetle . They couldn’t care less— tadpoles in marsh water . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Striking visuals! Love, Margherita  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
John, I do like this! Be well Roniece |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you both, These arose from impressionistic memories of that year of transition from childhood to adolescence. It was odd how they suddenly came up after so many decades submerged as thought lost. Thanks again John . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
I shall ask that old cat to sing a song. She might have been tuned well with life. it is good poem. |
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