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wordwizard
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on the way to next world

0 posted 2006-09-11 12:29 PM


She planted a few
seeds that grew
a lovely plant
you see
indirect light
danced on the serrated
leaf edges
indirectly viewed
by onlookers
constables included


a supervised neighbourhood
citizen watch
that kind of thing...
people want the security
not the invasiveness
of a many pointed leaf plant
seen by someone with a badge
lady could have sold it
decided to cut it up instead
cause it was no good

As if there are good
and bad plants
this one grew so nicely
but people are alright
so plant growth is supervised
even when one least suspects
indirectly viewed
by onlookers
looking for clues.



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ecrivan
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1 posted 2006-09-11 11:43 PM


always like your stuff


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