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aziza
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0 posted 2006-09-11 03:02 AM


I can't write poems
When I am emotionally blocked
Clogged by tears that won't fall
I can't write poems
Nor can I rest or sleep
I can only write empty words
As the darkness holds me close.
I can't write poems.

aziza

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HopeS
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1 posted 2006-09-11 03:20 AM


Wonderfully expresed , I have felt like that so many times

Hope

inspirational_insights
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2 posted 2006-09-11 09:19 AM


i too sometimes feel like this.....
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3 posted 2006-09-11 04:14 PM


Woo yeah....been there, did (didn't do!) that....choked on the teeshirt because I thought it was a burrito......

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iliana
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4 posted 2006-09-11 04:20 PM


It's the same for me....I must be mused!  
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2006-09-11 04:31 PM


I have been there so many times. Without our muses, we sure do seem lost don't we. HUGS.
exhale
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6 posted 2006-09-11 05:04 PM


I've been there so mnay times, I think everyone has.
Whether or not you can write when emotionally plugged, you still speak a thousand words to your readers, and all of them relatable.

The Lady
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7 posted 2006-09-11 10:26 PM



you're coming through
loud and clear aziza
keep writing...


Rick
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8 posted 2006-09-12 08:12 AM


I can't write poems
When I am emotionally blocked
Clogged by tears that won't fall
I can't write poems
Nor can I rest or sleep
I can only write empty words
As the darkness holds me close.
I can't write poems.

You can write what ever you want dear friend
though you feel empty of the words
they are there waiting for the right time, the right moment. A wave will come, washing away your darkness and coming to rest on a shore bathed with sunshine and words excited to speak. So take your time my friend, that time is coming, of words to share and smiles of happiness.

Enjoyed the read aziza, take care and be well.

Sincerely
Rick

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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9 posted 2006-09-12 08:24 AM


oh
lookie there
an original double breasted gesture
bouncing song
as if
the rest of the world
makes any sense?
you are way to familiar
and world’s apart
philosophically two stepping
on a plain of man’s childhood
so
serve up the love

well worth each second

tickle a roll of dice
bring the utterance
that look of miracles
into a residence
of your mind
is that thoughtful
labor of love
whispering
whispering

so reach up and pull

That transient dwelling

Extending
Extending

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
10 posted 2006-09-12 10:09 AM


ms az, your pen is working fine..just let it run
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