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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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I have a 1,000 stories and 1 to boot about a dumb blonde with alot of loot, dazed and confused, tied up and used, feeling him pull tighter on the noose, watching him stare feeling his glare, wondering what of the scent in the air, holding in and pressing on, never knowing who's side I am on, breaking the silence, remembering a lie, loving getting harder no matter how I tried, building up your emptiness again and again, deciding after all I was better off then, forgetting the me and tasting the wine, looking over the top ready for the decline, letting go of the black and entering the blue, forgetting about me and becoming you, and now I sit and wonder still, the feeling of love, what is it? DO TELL...... kingsangel [This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (11-22-2006 12:42 AM).] |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This is interesting. I like it. aziza |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, it is interesting and oh so good!! I enjoyed this write of yours very much! Be well Roniece |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms jul, like apples, when you pick a bad one, toss it and keep pickin..enjoyed it ms |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
aziza...One of my favs to date of mine thanx RDB... you seem to be following aziza....thank you and glad you are enjoying my writing... Daaark....I think I just picked a tall dark handsome one....Thank you this apple is much better....  kingsangel |
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