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william foos
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0 posted 2006-11-20 12:45 PM



below the white willow
there is a master
teaching and being tought
for each being
gives lessons to eachother
being peaceful
below the white willow

i see what i write and write what i see

© Copyright 2006 william foos - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2006-11-20 01:07 PM


Very nicely penned William...much enjoyed this piece.
Hugs~Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

The Lady
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2 posted 2006-11-20 02:37 PM




calmness flows
in your work
I like this
william


lightkeeper
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pluto
3 posted 2006-11-20 03:33 PM


i found myself in serene surroundings under the white willow.... very vivid indeed....  a vision shared is a reality experienced.

A enjoyable read...

          lightkeeper.

wredgranny
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4 posted 2006-11-20 06:28 PM


below the white willow
there is a master
teaching and being tought
for each being
gives lessons to eachother
being peaceful
below the white willow

i see what i write and write what i see

Siyo William Foos the wisdom of the Elders speak just these words! Sigi for sharing yours!


  granny!

passing shadows
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5 posted 2006-11-20 08:25 PM


very peaceful and calming
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2006-11-21 04:49 PM


Enjoyed...James
Martie
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7 posted 2006-11-21 05:35 PM


Teaching and being taught...indeed!  Nice poem, William!
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