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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA

0 posted 2006-11-16 04:59 PM


Spiritually out of tune
my mind expanding
like a balloon
an overflowing
of you in me
'tis not I but
you that isn't free
dareing you a peek
at the part of
you that's me
playing hide and seek
with the children in the trees


kingsangel

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Pressie
Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157
Oklahoma
1 posted 2006-11-16 05:09 PM


I see you.  
"dareing you a peek
at the part of
you that's me"

Thanks for sharing!



Omnia vincit amor

TP

Distortia
New Member
since 2006-11-16
Posts 5

2 posted 2006-11-16 05:16 PM


I am strangely captivated by these words, in an odd personal manner.

Perceptions of reality are bending as truth seeps into the masses.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2006-11-16 05:27 PM


ms angel, kewl spiral of unknotted expression, enjoyed it
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