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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2006-11-16 01:34 PM



you're surrounding my platform

with thoughts that make me want to conform

to your way of doing things

               is it the norm

for me to want to see your personality bling

with diamonds and gold and other glittering things?

if not, would you help me sing the correct way?

i'm more ready than Paul Young to never watch you walk away

                    again



                                                 love,

                                                 howard


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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
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1 posted 2006-11-17 01:10 PM


Did you send this? I liked...take care

kingsangel

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2006-11-18 07:50 AM


personality bling...I like that

M

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2006-11-18 09:48 AM


enjoyed this very much.
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