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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Above green pines The changed leaves Of oaks and elms A hawk is flying The air Under his wings Is a sea on which he glides Autumn for him is blue Mixed with the colors of desire To stay in a dream Of how things should have been And never come down . |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Huan - you write with such beauty! loved this work of yours Be well Roniece |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes indeed |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh yes indeed.... I like this poem on every level -- being that bird myself, from time to time. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thanks to the Three of you . . . Especially you Ed, Who, being an old dog yourself, for me is not easy to please. John . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
sooooo beautiful. what kind of heart can pump out those feelings!!! simply beautiful |
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