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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Lovers In velvet space between two minds A sacred place, as fate designs Begins the unison of psalm Unspoken touch that lingers on As words convey the depths in sound Fall far away two spirits bound Each wave by far more touch in truth By simple thought, contentment proof Between two hearts the fire set free To forge desires symmetry And longing kindles hopeful finds In velvet space between two minds Copyright Kkh 9/9/06 |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
What a beautiful poem, Kathleen..... Between two hearts the fire set free To forge desires symmetry And longing kindles hopeful finds In velvet space between two minds Thank you for sharing with us. Hugs, Ethel  Ethel's Creations Ethel's Love Poetry |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"In velvet space between two minds" so well said TD... |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I like the flow in this well crafted poem! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
enjoyed the happy feeling this gave |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"In velvet space between two minds" beautiful just beautiful |
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Refugee Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 97 |
Beautiful words Diamond.... |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Nicely done, loved the 'velvet space between two minds'... CG |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
"In velvet space between two minds A sacred place, as fate designs" And a lovely place it can be. I like this. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This reads so very well, trips easy off the tongue and has such a preciously beautiful feel to it, i enjoyed it, thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"In velvet space between two minds A sacred place, as fate designs Begins the unison of psalm Unspoken touch that lingers on" ___________________________________ Gorgeous imagery....absolutely LOVE this!  Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
A really beautiful and well written work. Lovely rhyme and flow. Thank you for sharing this. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Talk about velvet, this IS what velvet feels like, smooth, dreamy, inviting. A stunning write, Kathleen! |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
beautifully crafted---leaves one staring over the edge of happiness and dropping a tear......... |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA |
Perfectly done...amazing write...I admire your use of expressions and how all comes together in the end. Look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Refugee Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 97 |
A most beautiful, tender poem. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A beautiful write Kathleen! Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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