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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-11-11 02:44 AM


Seasons Within


"Within her caress I found happiness,
if only for a season..."


I can still remember
how she made me feel
while she was close
to my heart,

but the feelings I felt
after she walked away,
more clearly reflect
the reasons
we're apart.

She visits
in one week
to spend one
week with me.

She ask me if
I was excited,
I said, "You'll
have to come
to see."


JamesLee
10November
2006


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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2006-11-11 02:47 AM


I like your poetry, James.  Wishing you all that you dream --

Alison

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2006-11-11 02:49 AM


definitely love your words James!  
I wish you happiness always

Be well
Roniece

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2006-11-11 07:30 AM


some things are for a season only *sigh*
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-11-11 06:17 PM


Very nice James.
Mahalo nui loa for over 22,000 sterling posts!

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
5 posted 2006-11-11 07:23 PM


James,
this sounds like an access visit and the hope mingled with anxiety clearly shines through. You did a good job with this.

cheers

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
6 posted 2006-11-11 10:47 PM




do I feel anticipation, James?
well done


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