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A Summer Eye-Opener (Senryu)
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A Summer Eye-Opener (Senryu) |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
A Summer Eye-Opener Sleepy summer days Lead to sleepy summer nights, And wide-awake love. I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
wide-awake love followed by sleepy love? maybe? lovely, John |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
Hi, TL. Oh my, most definitely yes. I only meant that last line to convey the immediate, needy passion brought about by such a lovely, sleepy day. After that, pure love, and soft, gentle touches take hold. John xo I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran |
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