blow the bloody trees down

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Open Poetry #39

blow the bloody trees down

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2006-11-04 05:41 PM

Blow the bloody trees down,
leaves and all!

Sudden gale force winds spew
autumn handfuls of gold
onto barren open ground,
soaked with goodbye tears.

Your heart shield
~soft gold~
calling my name
first in love
then in shame
shame on me

protecting
rejecting,
the ambered gift of me.

Blow the bloody trees
to the corners of the globe,
for I care not
whether trees collapse today;

this heart has done just so
with a bilious blow of words
and winter has set in
while I was still
believing
it to be
Spring.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2006-11-04 07:08 PM

Couldn't believe the title, dear Kacy!

I perceive this as a powerful description of a sort of black out of the heart's glow.

I feel so cold right now, this makes it easier to understand.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2006-11-04 11:15 PM

Thank you Margherita, for your kind reply.
I am OK now. Yes, it was a total blackout.

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