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Is This YOUR Ink ?
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Is This YOUR Ink ? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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I cannot go with you for there are those who hold me here in melting memories that clutch at my today keeping me from the joy of tomorrow within your embrace Please, I beg you, please do not shed the tears for me to drown in for I am not worthy of the saline of you I cannot go I can not go though my heart treads the waters of goodbye do not ask my heart to explain the why~ ~Soft poetic sighs of a parting~ (SOMEONE ELSE'S ink dripped into my quill ?) *Honest Injun* ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Crackling fissures borne onto my heart from what you have written. What has touched you so, as to bring these painful words pouring forth onto paper that usually radiates joy? Heartrendering. Sandra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What you do with words. Masterful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
A winning write!!! You've dipped your quill in a wounded, mourning heart and came up with a winner. Kudos! Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~)) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSandra~ Sometimes I simply catch the thoughts of others ... this one came in a three-minute rush ... overriding my own ink ... crying to be poured~ I don't often 'understand' the 'why' of it ... but I usually just *sigh* and let it happen~ Someone will let me know who they belong to~ Loper~ Oh, you just say the nicest things~ The 'words' write themselves in this one~ MaggieDear~ Thank you always for believing in my ink~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*sigh* May I borrow your muse Marge? I haven't seen mine since Halloween. This is a heart ache of a spill. Love you. Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Gee, I remember when that used to happen to me. The poem would be running through my mind and I'd have to get to a pen to write it down. It's been a long time since...maybe it's because I seldom run anymore. LOL Your poem is precious. Rae |
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writergrl Member
since 2006-10-30
Posts 73Las Vegas, Nevada |
poignant and deeply touching, another winner! "You cannot stain a black coat." |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Incredibly poignant and beautiful and no, I cannot claim the ink! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
(...shyly raising his hand....) Here. Over here. It's mine. But you've used it so well, I couldn't possibly ask you to give it back....you keep this batch, it's well-bestowed and I've got more, much more. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this sounds like a gentle spirit or maybe even a few passing shadows |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
M'dear Marge, this is most assuredly your ink. However, you are using a different colour this time!  ~ and your inks rival all the colours in a rainbow! Love & Rainbow Light, EO |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl as always you write what you feel, and beautifully done. I'll send you some pretty pics of us all at the renewal when I get them, and I looked lovely, so did the others, but then i am the pretty one aren't I. Awfully vain creature aren't I? Take care always as always Mushy Keth says that it isn't always pretty that counts, we both send you a hi from a cold and bright Maidstone. Love you muchly x x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Hello, I'm up here! A friend is ill aqnd will probbly leave me. I have cried for days. Thaqnk you for posting whaqt I cqnnot. Love you, M |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Marge between your poem and Misty Lilacs' answer I am sore at heart beautifully done... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Marge, This is so painfully beautiful. FNG |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I can't claim it... even though I'd be honored to do so. *S* Your talent is surpassed only by your greatness of heart, dear lady. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I can only say a humble thank you for the replies to this spill of ink~ Too many have written me to let me know that their hearts are stained with the word-cries of this one~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
Marge, This is just beautiful! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and I'm smiling as you catch those feelings well, painting them in hues of understanding. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely written, so touching, very touching. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Marge, I can read this both ways. I see in the back of my mind someone telling that dark angel you wrote of, that it is not time to take her/him because there are those still in need of them here, and more to do before they go..... best to you,martyjo |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
my heart reads this as if my ink as well...beautiful |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
~AHO~ Elditlv ulv the spirits speak most loudly through those hearts whose tenderness is so evident,your heart hears and answers.Your beauty will forever live within the words so hurtfully given,sigi dear one for the sharing!
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nicely written inkspillage... hugs,g "Home..is for free expression, not for good impression..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*sigh* Sadly, the replies show me that too many of us recognize the ink~ Find comfort dear friends ... find comfort~ *HUGLETS* to you ALL~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
so beautiful. It is not my ink. It is my heart, sometimes. it is so black..must be very sad. love this one |
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