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0 posted 2006-10-31 01:45 PM





.
.
.
.
.
For the sun
to set
I wait.
Heart pounding,
beads of sweat
forming on
my upper lip.
My breath
comes quickly
as darkness
cloaks me
in a shawl
of anticipation.
Suddenly
you are a
shadow on the
moon.
I tie back
my hair
with the hem
of your cape,
tilt my head
to one side,
and close
my eyes
to the
madness
which follows.
Your strike is
sure and quick.
With a beating
of wings
you are gone.
I shiver in
the night air,
yet my neck
burns.
Through the
insanity
I know too well
that to-morrow
the blood red sun
will have to
set,
and once again....

I will wait.


*~*~*~*


© Copyright 2006 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-10-31 01:59 PM


  
WHOOOHOOO!  Don't we just love tonight eh Chris!??
Love this....and you!
Have fun...play safe.
~Love and miss ya, Teed~

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

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2 posted 2006-10-31 02:01 PM


Chris~
Look at us 'Three HuskAHalloweenieTeers' go~


WHAT FUN !!!

Happy Halloweenie, sweets~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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3 posted 2006-10-31 02:26 PM


Hi, Chris! I haven't seen you around for some time!
Ya got me timbers shiverin' with this Halloween beauty!

Be careful of all the things that go bump in the night.


Linda

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4 posted 2006-10-31 02:38 PM


uh, Chris?   BOO!!!
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5 posted 2006-10-31 02:49 PM


yucky, bloody, vampiry (iz that a word) thoughts

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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6 posted 2006-10-31 05:45 PM


Brrrrrrrrrr .... you created such suspension here, dear Chris. Very good job!
Happy Halloween!
Love,
Margherita

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7 posted 2006-10-31 07:06 PM


Thankyou all so much !!!  
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8 posted 2006-10-31 07:22 PM



Chris...so glad to see you
having some Hallowe'en fun...

and what a wonderful poem!




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9 posted 2006-10-31 09:10 PM


Happy Halloween!
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10 posted 2006-10-31 09:45 PM


Wow Chris, this is awesome....loved it all.
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11 posted 2006-10-31 09:46 PM


Karilea, Dixie & Magnus - thankyou my friends! Hugs!
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12 posted 2006-10-31 10:04 PM


Love this! Definitely settting the Halloween spirit!

"Nature has implanted in our minds an insatiable longing to seek the truth" - CJCL Convention Theme 2005

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13 posted 2006-10-31 10:39 PM


Thankyou dea !!
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14 posted 2006-10-31 11:16 PM


Hehehe.....I'm reminded of Dark Shadows...remember that, Chris?  Enjoyed this.  Happy Halloween!
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15 posted 2006-11-01 02:03 PM


jo - yes, I do remember Dark Shadows! Ah, now I will be daydreaming....as usual...lol.
Thanks & Hugs!

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oohhh
I liked this shivery poem Chris
my kind of Halloween fun...

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Dearest Lady - I thankyou.
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