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poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
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0 posted 2006-09-02 05:25 AM


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Living on Love

02 September 2006


Like a string on a tight rope
there was your care and your love
Yet what would become of the broken hearted
to be left alone, far from kind in ways to seek

As if you were tomorrow
and yesterday had just began
Where the flame was in your eyes
but the destination was unavailable

This placement of time
where you and I would greet
As if every day previous was never there
the day the sunlight and sparkle gather
to add an additional shine to your hair

Then we would both know in our hearts
this associating created to dwell
Making a living on love

No more hunger, no more pain to endure
because next to you, I would indeed share
The day of today, the day when time began
because into your eyes to see
I would indeed look and know I can


“What becomes of the broken hearted
Who had love that's now departed
I know I've got to find
Some kind of peace of mind, maybe”
Lyrics: What Becomes of the Broken Hearted
1966 hit recording as performed by Jimmy Ruffin
(Born: 07 May 1939 in Collinsville, Mississippi, USA)



© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares


© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
1 posted 2006-09-02 10:44 PM


A wonderful read.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2006-09-03 05:05 AM


You translated those lyrics into a lovely poem.


Ea

poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
New Zealand
3 posted 2006-09-03 05:09 AM


It was more of an accident on my part, or a coincidence that in listening to the whispering of my inner-voice, the words appeared from my head, that related to the line of the song

Nothing is ever planned in my world of writing, it just happens

While your comments and thoughts were certainly welcome in my world of whispering thoughts from within

As the kind of love the poem was inspired by is just beginning to blossom

Some call that insanity (some might say poetry)



a poet who cares

[This message has been edited by poettothecars (09-03-2006 07:44 AM).]

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