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Open Poetry #39
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ballajosue
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since 2006-06-04
Posts 45
Ca, Us
0 posted 2006-10-28 08:42 PM


young man, hard man
gonna take the world on someday
old man, poor man
gonna make me some peace some peace someday
dumb man, tall man
gonna reach the moon someday
smart man, short man
gonna get me some land someday
business man, wealthy man
gonna buy me love someday
working man, healthy man
gonna show you love someday
sad man, dead man
gonna live again someday
happy man, wise man
gonna die with a smile someday.


        
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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
1 posted 2006-10-29 01:46 PM

oh man, oh Man--
hope I get it right someday---

Apparently, as suggested by your interesting poem, many fail to do so!May word to the wise be sufficient!

Thank You,
  David

Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing
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