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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-10-28 08:12 AM


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Heaven in Hollywood
27 November 2005


There was a place in Ontario
where heaven and Hollywood did meet
This place the stars of the universe
held hands in celebration to greet


Chocolate flavoured berries
and glitter from the sky
Her beauty was enough
to make any man cry


Tears of wonder
to her attraction in looks
She should have been a model
and feature on pages of fashion books


This place in Canada in providence
where the skies were sparking in view
Because she was heaven in Hollywood
and in Ontario that was all but true



© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)


a poet who cares



© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
Mr. Omniscient
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1 posted 2006-10-29 08:31 PM


That was a good poem... Nice work

poettothecars
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2 posted 2006-10-29 08:46 PM


thank you

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