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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-10-27 08:13 AM


This morning when sleepy eyes opened
and first glance was caught,
you were not there
to add the usual charm
of enlightenment;

heavy was the fog
covering that special place

where sun and moon collide

like lovers walking hand in hand
under new day skies

but in the distance
I saw shimmering glimpses
of you arriving in your
chariots of gold
with smile flashing bright

illuminating,

today.

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-27-2006 08:49 AM).]

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Margherita
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1 posted 2006-10-27 09:12 AM


Oh, this is truly lovely, dear Donna!

Indeed the Light is always there, even if hidden.

Beautiful illumination!

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine
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2 posted 2006-10-27 09:50 AM



I feel sorry for those who "sleep in" and miss the majesty of such delights...

beautiful imagery...as if I were there...




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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-10-27 11:11 AM


Ode to a beautiful day..
A 1derful piece

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-10-27 11:24 AM


Gentle Spirit
A delight to read.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2006-10-27 02:17 PM




(does happy dance) Awwwwwwww, this is wonderfully hopeful and romantic, sweet friend, and may that smile truly find its way into your heart and take you away on velveteen dreamscape fields white as snow, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2006-10-27 05:49 PM


Wonderful....James
luminosity
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7 posted 2006-10-29 10:19 PM


BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!
how could one not cheer to read thsi

The Lady
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8 posted 2006-10-29 10:42 PM



you've drawn a burnished dawn here
gentle Donna

have a lovely night...
sweet lady

(I miss your countenance)

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