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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia 
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A bird on a branch Near the tree top. Wind started blowing and he feared he'd drop. He looked down at the ground and it gave him a fright. So he took to the sky To escape the height. The frog and the turtle Sitting on a log It began to rain on the turtle and frog. Their minds got disturbed They started to fret And jumped in the pond, so they wouldn't get wet. Jane loved Bobby and Bob loved Jane But Jane couldn't bare anymore pain. Giving her heart made her scared. It only got broken, everytime she dared. So she pulled back and pushed him away. Lived all alone 'til her dying day. Cried day and night 'til they laid her in the dirt. Wrapped in sorrow, so she wouldn't get hurt. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is so sad, but yet can very much relate to Jane's feelings in this. So nicely done Larry, I do so enjoy your poetry.  |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Thank you so much for reading and replying. I am glad you like my writings. Thank you soooo much for calling what I write "poetry". Coming from you...that is quite a compliment. I will be able to glow from that for several days. ::smiles:: (((Gentle Spirit))) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Cried day and night 'til they laid her in the dirt. Wrapped in sorrow, so she wouldn't get hurt." wonderful as usual Uriah... |
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BloodyEclipse Junior Member
since 2006-09-07
Posts 16 |
Stupid Woman... As for the man... He did nothing and what does that say? Was it even worth the tears? |
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